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Invited Paradox

Burning desires chills my mind,
crowns me with thorny errands 
unpaid are the Karmic dues.

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  • February Moon gold member
    January 31, 2008
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    I enjoyed this.


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Love the inspiration you drew from the prompt, very timing and creative. Nicely done indeed.