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Morning Glorie's Embrace

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Autumn breeze turns to winter chill
Like a soft velvet fleece
You embrace me; quite me still
As hot spring steam, my anxieties release

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    February 7, 2008

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    excellent~

    I agree
    You did pen a beautiful poem...
    I could go for the hot steam myself
    Best of luck in the contest...
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Kiddy
    February 3, 2008
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    Beautiful picture... Very figurative... You have done a wonderful job...
    Love
    -Kiddy


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    How beautiful and uplifting...it is wonderful how others in our life's can help us more than they often know...lovely imagery and metaphor...nice sweet flow of words...
    Thank you for sharing!
    Best