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Siren

You drug me
With the beautiful
Words you spew.

Snatched back by
Reality
Just in time
For I almost jumped
Into your arms and
The euphoric screams
I would have made as
I fell from the world
Into your spell filled
With the language of gods
Untold of from ancient times.

But then I feel the grip you kept
Over my thoughts and even the physical
Attraction that is ever present in the
Unwaining attentions of my affection.

I have forgotten to tie myself like the
Heroic Oddysseus and I plunge into enchantment
I mean nothing to you
Just an anonymous meal for your hunger to rule.

You damn siren.

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  • Xx Luna xX
    February 1, 2008

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    Thank you for entering

    The euphoric screams
    I would have made as
    I fell from the world
    Love these lines

    Wow, this is great! I love the element of myth you presented in this... Well done