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Paradise of Beauty

So much beauty in this one place
is there any end to the ongoing sea
that seems to be one with the sky?
Turning and spinning
thoughts race through mind
what's beyond that big island in the distance?
Could there be more to my being
than just
this paradise
of beauty?
If I reach out my hand
will I be able to grasp
the answers to my questions
and the things
that I know nothing of?
What IS beyond
this solitary
Paradise of Beauty.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 1

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    OOOOOH Great take. Even though you dont mention which picture you choose. I know Well done.
    Thank you for you entry in my contest.


    Delila