Everytime I hear your voice,
My body shivers in excitement
Everytime I see your face,
My mind loses it's sanity
Everytime I dream of you,
I wake with a silly smile
And everytime you dissapoint me
I know I'll always come back for more...
I'm broken-
because everytime you hurt me,
I come back for more
Please tell me what you think
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whoa nice short poem
i love your endings they are beautiful and straight to the point
"I'm broken-
because everytime you hurt me,
I come back for more"
i love simplicity in your writing but with so much emotion and feeling behind it well done and excellent poem
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great
love it,
but in the line where u wrote "...I'll always be back for more..." wouldn't it of sounded better if you said "...I'll always be back in a while..."?
still a good poem,
i relate to it in a strangely literal way...
i enjoy physical pain lol
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