Her desire burns for the kisses of her lips.
For the caressing on her skin from her finger tips.
For the warm embrace only her arms can provide.
For the heat from her body as she lays by her side.
A desire for passion that she's never known before.
The passion from a woman is what she needs to explore.
Tongues intertwined and pussies pressed together.
Fingers exploring places with the touch of a feather.
Nibbling on her thighs til her tongue marks the spot.
Wetness on her face from the pussy she's made hot.
Sucking on her clit hard and licking it fast.
Turning minutes into hours to make this night last.
She knows that this moment may never come again.
A wink and a smile for the person she calls friend.
'' I know that I'm nervous and I know this can be scary.''
'' I'm just glad that it's you who's going to pop my lesbian cherry.''
Author notes
option # 2..sexual love
pappacass
In a list
- HONORABLE MENTIONS • next in list
- BRONZE TROPHIES • next in list
- ADULT OR EROTIC POEMS • next in list
- GOLD TROPHIES • next in list
A contest entry
- Love in the Shadows by Wild-N-Wiccan.
530 points, ended February 14, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF...When A Woman Loves A Woman by gypsyfan.
600 points, ended April 8, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - xxxDIRTY, EROTIC,FILTHY, HOT (Adult Only)xxx by voodoo ink.
1650 points, ended April 30, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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er...I feel a bit dirty right now. I'm not into this topic...but congrats on all the medals. Wow.
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loved it babe i actually wrote to this same piece called bitches heat something it is old but you nailed this i am proud of this piece
good luck
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OMFG!!! This is such an explicitly delicious write, all the way to the cherry
...I especially love the image you added with this damn good piece of writing...
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Amazing.... beautiful.... and hot!! You've taken my breath away!!
Well done!!Good luck in the contest!
X
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This is beautiful. As beautiful and sensious as watching two women make love to each other.
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Whew!
I love the rawness of this piece... I love the flow and scheme as well. I love the ending too! Thank you for entering. Excellent..
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That is sexual love all right. I loved it, especially here:
For the warm embrace only her arms can provide.
For the heat from her body as she lays by her side.
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wow i must say i loved it...some advice get a little more detailed to show what is being seen.
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm this piece brought back memories...
yes, i've watcched two women making it together, and learned a few things from the experience!
good luck in my contest, and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
wow..u don't hold back do u? lol..i like your frankness, though. This was an EROTIC read!! But it seems to delight your readers..keep up the good work<3
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Extremely Amazing
This poem is phenomonal. with me being bi, i am just astonished by how sexy you could make a female/female not seem so weird like people think it is. keep it goin!
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This was a steamy write with sensuality/erotica, but not too dirty that every other word is a cuss. I like the rhyme in this and I like the way you describe everything that's happening (though it does help that I'm bi lol). Sometimes experimenting with a friend is a nice idea, it's occupied several of my dreams.
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Hey this poem is hot and so is the picture haha... Its an awesome poem I like it
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Hot
wow...this is EROTIC!!! Iv only kissed another chick once, and I promised never again, but never have I gone this far! woa! seems like a fantasy every guy dreams of. kind of like my poem virginity. Wow...thts all I can say lol
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Huh, well that knock me over.
Well written good Job!
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I liked the last line. It made me giggle.
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okay Wow this is Amazing And Verry Well Written!
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WAHOO!!! We are both exploring this very thing at the moment it seems!!
This was hot hot hot. The pic is awesome!!!!!
LOVE IT
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Very, very good my brother.You are madd but this was written with deep thought.very sensual and romantic until the last line. Great penning!!!
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Well now isn't this every guys fantasy??? 2 naked ladies pressed together.... This was such a HOT and sensual piece!! I really enjoyed this from beginning to end. Well done!
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Wow Shawn...
this is indeed a very broad topic my friend, I feel that you nailed this piece, in the most beautiful way possible...creating comfort for her first time
outstanding
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