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Alluring Vamp

Elegant in shadows.
  Exquisite, radiant abomination.
      Jolting subconscious blindness.
 

        Nape shivers uncontrollably.
            Evil, subsumes spirit.
              Ecstasy, corruptive and hypnotic.
                 
                  Consummation is death.
             

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Nicely written...dark truth of a vamp...alluring evil...nice flow and word choice...
    Thank you for entering!