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I Want A Love

I want a love that moves mountains
I want a love that isn't hidden behind a blanket of curtains
I want a love that overcomes all obstacles in its way
I want a love that is always here to stay
I want a love that sends fire to my heart at just a touch
I want a love that is as innocent as an elementary playground crush
I want a love that lasts a lifetime
I want a love where our hearts combine
I want a love that will find me no matter how far I run
I want a love as bright as the sun
I want a love that everyone wants
I want a love that counts
I want a love that is steriotypical
I want a lave that my grandma had with my grandpa

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  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    February 11, 2008

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    I love how you have put this piece together!
    It's very descriptive, and I think I read it in class....but I'll say it again!
    Well done!!!

    P.S.
    You better keep writing!....