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illusion

                       

 

     somewhere

              somehow

                       someone

mislead you

into believing

you have absolute

power

              telling me

I don't belong

here

            ..........

                           

                              illusions

                                  of

                              grandeur

 

 

 

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  • katzmeow13
    February 2, 2008
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    Thank you for the comments, this poem is fitting this week.
    I have been living on these islands for almost seven years, and earlier this week a 'gentleman' (figure of speech) pretty much said he was going to be rid of me soon... even if I have never had anything to do with him or his family.
    Enraged and insulted, this was my outlet. At the end of the day... he will be the fool.
    Thanks again,
    Kathleen


  • stompsalot
    January 31, 2008
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    GORGEOUS

    Gorgeous, powerful write! This poem says so much!!! A brilliant write! Definately Gold Trophy material right here!! I just so adore the way it reads and the emotion it leaves me with... Like a sense of power or something. Amazing! Kinda like nanner nanner, you can't control me.
    Many blessings and *stomps


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Very well written...so very true and deep...love the ending...for illusions it often is...excellent work...
    Thank you for entering!