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Dirty P>R>E>T>T>Y is ""My Girl""

I’m thinking that this is ∂unique∂
              That this ∙form∙ lets me speak

Like a hooker in √red high heels√
Instead of BLACK, its how she feels

A line can be as long as sin
  But you’ll never
                        ever

        …ever…

!!WIN!!

And keep on writing Y>E>S> you will
Just to speak of how you feel

At first it is your only passion
Then it feels so out of fashion

And then you miss your former ♥love♥
When it’s down to the final      &shove&

You’LL scream it with a full twirl

DIRTY PRETTY is “my girl”

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Kiss ME baby

The Artist FKA Gun

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  • so L O S T in life
    February 6, 2008

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    haha i love it.
    its great
    i rember dirty pretty from last year good times good times
    nice poem
    love ya


  • c e ll a r . d oo r
    February 5, 2008
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    haha. i love this. this is so different from everyhting else. good luck in the contest :]!!


  • Chrissi
    February 5, 2008

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    Wow babe!
    this is good! I know almost exactly where you are coming from and its awesome! You did an excelent write! i love it keep it up babe!
    love ya,
    wife


  • Nicotine Eyes
    January 31, 2008

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    Wow..I love how you wrote about the form. This wasnr very hardcore, but i liked it, it was simple. <|F.list|> f o r s u r e.

    Thanks.