Time after time
People fail
Time after time
We have not succeeded
But now wings granted
Starting to the sky
With wings now given
We rocket up high
Miracles surround
A contest entry
- 30 words or less/20 entries...Inspirational by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very well done and deep!
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this actually is true to about 99.9% of everybody in the world and m
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Very strong and powerful words of strength and incouragement...very beautifully said...nice work...
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simple to the point. i like it. it has meaning and the writing is good.
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intresting...all I know to say
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grr... this is good... as always.. im sorry... ily....
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Leaves me wondering what caused fail to turn to such success. Wings and rocket seem like a contrast for I picture wings flying and soaring not rushing like a rocket.
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awesome write Asa. you've always been pretty damn good!
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I love this. This is so pretty!! That's unusual coming from you now.
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I read this through several times. I am never one to put a poet's work down, and I will not do this now. I might suggest that your words are a bit fragmented, and when read all together, make no sense. If I am wrong, please correct me.I do wish you all the luck in this contest!
Shana -
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Beautiful and very uplifting.
Well done here best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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