I'm slowly sewing myself together with tainted thread
You'll find out soon enough that inside I am dead
The needle goes in and the needle goes out
In fear and in pain I fearfully shout
What am I doing? Why can’t I succeed?
Why am I sewing? Why don’t I just let myself bleed?
That’s what I wanted from the beginning
So I can put all my pain and misery to an ending
I’m getting closer to my last breath as I bleed to death
This is the final step; there will be nothing left
My heart pumps harder and harder as it tries to sustain
My body goes into shock as it tries to maintain
Any resemblance of life has now left me
The coma has set in now I’m almost free
All that is left is for me to let go
So I’ll be fully free from pain that made me stoop this low
I see my childhood flash before my eyes
I look so happy; is this a disguise?
Maybe I’m happily insane, now that would explain
Why I enjoy bodily harm and I love pain
A toxic smile forms on my lips
As my blood quickly drips
On to the floor causing a shiny gleam
My life's more messed up than it may seem
To someone that didn't care
Someone that let me drown in a pool of my own despair
I'm laughing now
As you wonder how
How am I laughing at my own death?
How can I be happy as I take my last breath?
This is my revenge because you tore my heart
You ripped it to shreds and you tore it apart
Leaving the remains in the dirt
Leaving me torn and brutally hurt
Scrounging and looking to find all the pieces
Then I gave up after I checked all the creases
I was only missing one little piece
You still had that one part my face fell and my crying increased
I wanted it back, and I wanted you too
Even after you said 'I didn't love you'
So I gave up on sewing back together my heart
I just let myself slowly begin to fall apart
As I continue to fall to pieces
My breathing stops and my heart seizes
I’ve finally let go; I’m no longer in existence
You can forget about me cause there will be no repentance
A contest entry
- Bleed For Me... by infinitechaos07.
600 points, ended February 1, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BROKEN HEARTED by DAMSELx.
300 points, ended March 13, 2008, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderful rhyming, it gave the poem a nice flow. =] hmm wellwhat can I say? It was just quite excellent in general and very nicely written.
Amazing write.
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This is an awesome poem. I feel this way right now. My relationship of 10 1/2 years has come to an end. He chose someone over me and disrespected me in ways that I never thought he would. The pain that I feel is so intense. I hope that things get better for you. Great writes and I look forward to reading more from you.
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One of the best poems I've read...ever. You've managed to get across all the emotions I've felt but could never describe.
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awesome
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kool write... pleasure reading
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wow! good job! this is so awesome! you guys did so good!!!! wow! it is so enthralling! it just makes me so sad and feel like i didn't know enough to help you and that i've failed you!
good job! i love it! you did an awesome write!
love ya
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Oh the pain!
Man it hurt reading this! but at the same time it was engrossing, so kudos to the two of you for penning a very good piece.
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Damn this is so good! So full of imagery it pulls the reader into the senario, it's like I was right there watching you. Btw I like pain too =) Kinda sad but idk lol. Very good write, thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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