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The fire faerie

The flight of the phoenix,
the touch of wind.
The heat of the fire,
the shine of the moon.

Once there were six,
all of her kind.
All driven by desire,
and to death immune.

Now only one left,
all others have gone.
The went to the grey lands,
and left her behind.

Lives through theft,
all feeling forgone.
The night she commands,
last of her kind

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  • theDARK1 gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    I have the same concept of course on a different level. I feel that she will always be "the one" just like you do here in your magical words. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • Passionate Phoenix
    January 31, 2008

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    wonderful, lovely imagery and great take on the picture.

    some lovely ideas here, thanks for entering and good luck! xx