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Tied Down

Grabing from all sided
Pulling me apart
Will i survive the madness?
I hope so...

A contest entry

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 2, 2008
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    ah..what a great write is here..so short yet so powerful in immagery and impact as well...


  • Fug-azi
    January 31, 2008
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    it all good to me


  • Naridill gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Simple and fluent - you hide nothing but question everything - very evil and delicately emotionless.

    Thanks for entering,


    • Izu
      January 31, 2008
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      thank you, your comment is much appreciated.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Wonderful work here!
    Good luck to you with this one
    and thanks a lot for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826


    • Izu
      January 31, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment, its appreciated.


  • Dirty and Broken
    January 31, 2008
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    what's going on?

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