Light filters
through the haze
of windows,
as I attempted
to wrap my self up.
Author notes
Picture prompt: "Trying to be" by Gnato
A contest entry
- 10 poets x 15 words x 15 minutes [QUICKIE] [PIF] by Naridill.
420 points, ended January 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know How this makes you feel, what do you think?
Comments
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great piece.
makes me think of how sometimes
we get wrapped up in ourselves
and then
someone who loves us helps us
to fight off the darkness.

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Unusual take on the image. Very unique concept. Cloaking the naked spirit attempting to shelter from the harshness of agression.


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love the take on the picture ...


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Interesting take on the prompt.
A self-made mummy! lol
Great work here and good luck
to you with it! Thanks for sharing!
Jeremy0826 -
Kinky
Well, tying yourself up.. oneplay - instead of foreplay.
Just kidding, this is intriguing and filled with thought and fluent emotions.
Thanks for entering,
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