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Prisoner Of My Own Device

 

 

So many emotions

pulling at me constantly

trying to break free

no room to breathe

 

Author notes

10 Words
Prompt: Picture trying to be... by *gnato

A contest entry

Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!

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Comments


  • Tirrell
    January 31, 2008
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    stunning subtext here my friend, a wonderful write


  • Ephiphany
    January 31, 2008

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    I really liked this one loved the picture.
    Good lukc, I think you did a wonderful job with just 10 words my friend.

    Lady♥


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 31, 2008

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    A very well penned take on the prompt. Direct and so well executed. Best of luck in the contest!


  • Naridill gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Very stunning - captivating emotions driven through out.
    More punctuation would make for a happy Heather but as is, is still effective.

    Thanks for entering,