Meaningless assertions demand notice,
content in blind eyes & illusions,
frowning on disproportionate tidal waves;
Meaningless assertions demand notice,
content in blind eyes & illusions,
frowning on disproportionate tidal waves;
Author notes
Prompt:: Picture
Picture Credit::
trying to be... by *gnato
A contest entry
- 10 poets x 15 words x 15 minutes [QUICKIE] [PIF] by Naridill.
420 points, ended January 31, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honesty would be lovely
Comments
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Sweet brevity.
Congrats on the gold.
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Very nicely done Friday
The picture was stunning and you rocked it!
congrats on the Gold my friend
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Goes to show writing angry works 
(Wonder what I was angry about? lol) -
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~chanting to self~
I WILL NOT get angry at ignorance today
I WILL NOT get angry at ignorance today
~sigh~
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You rule.
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Beautifull and deep take upon the prompt,
I live the phrasing of this one! Wonderful take on the prompt.
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Very nice take on the prompt!!!
Loved this:
"frowning on disproportionate tidal waves"
You have such a brilliant little muse, why oh why will she not let me borrow her??
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wow this is an amazing take as always ..see this is why i am keeping your muse hehe best of luck hun
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bah .. between you, Melted dawn, Sulfane and Mark .. I might as well invent invisibilty, I stand more chance than winning
Seriously though between you guys/gals you turn these short poems into something huge.
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Wonderful work here as usual
my friend! Good luck to you with
this one and thanks for sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
I knew I was defeated! LOL Very well done I don't think I even have to wish you luck in the contest!
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Wheres my full stop at the end [?]
I will be back to check up on the poor bugger.
Apart from that - this is divine.
Thanks for entering,
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