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Judgement of the Innocent

Missing image

Meaningless assertions demand notice,
content in blind eyes & illusions,
frowning on disproportionate tidal waves;





Author notes

Prompt:: Picture

Picture Credit::
trying to be... by *gnato

A contest entry

Honesty would be lovely

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Comments

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 1, 2008
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    Sweet brevity.
    Congrats on the gold.


  • Tattboyspet
    January 31, 2008

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    Very nicely done Friday
    The picture was stunning and you rocked it!
    congrats on the Gold my friend


    • Exodus gold member
      January 31, 2008

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      Goes to show writing angry works
      (Wonder what I was angry about? lol)


      • Tattboyspet
        January 31, 2008
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        ~chanting to self~
        I WILL NOT get angry at ignorance today
        I WILL NOT get angry at ignorance today

        ~sigh~


  • February Moon gold member
    January 31, 2008
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    You rule.


  • Tirrell
    January 31, 2008

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    Beautifull and deep take upon the prompt,
    I live the phrasing of this one! Wonderful take on the prompt.


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 31, 2008

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    Very nice take on the prompt!!!

    Loved this:

    "frowning on disproportionate tidal waves"

    You have such a brilliant little muse, why oh why will she not let me borrow her??


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    wow this is an amazing take as always ..see this is why i am keeping your muse hehe best of luck hun


  • Fug-azi
    January 31, 2008

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    bah .. between you, Melted dawn, Sulfane and Mark .. I might as well invent invisibilty, I stand more chance than winning

    Seriously though between you guys/gals you turn these short poems into something huge.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Wonderful work here as usual
    my friend! Good luck to you with
    this one and thanks for sharing it!




    Jeremy0826


  • Kari gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    I knew I was defeated! LOL Very well done I don't think I even have to wish you luck in the contest!


  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Wheres my full stop at the end [?]
    I will be back to check up on the poor bugger.
    Apart from that - this is divine.

    Thanks for entering,

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