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Don't Let Go

Hold on, don't let go of me,
My world will Crumble without you,
Life isn't worth it
                  But you are,
Don't let me spin into the darkness again,
Hold on to me, and don't ever let me go,
    I will die in your arms

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  • Akari
    November 6, 2008
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    Very Very Good!

    Great Job, It's about Kyo Isn't it?


  • Sir Squigglim
    September 27, 2008

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    My heart stopped. I've been reading a lot of poems and have made alot of comments today... but this is by far the most beautiful thing... ever. It's so...perfect. I don't even know what to say about it.

    I will die in your arms


  • AmandaAwkward
    July 16, 2008

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    ♥i love it♥

    it's short&sweet :p

    beautiful

    amazing

    you got skills

    hehe

    [keepitup]

    always,,,

    gummybearfaceX3

     


  • AbandonedAngel
    May 12, 2008
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    Very good. Well done.

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