I want you to know,
that you are so good at your game.
You even had me fooled;
I believed you told the truth.
I trusted you with my vulnerable weak heart.
I trusted you to catch me,
from my fall off the tight rope.
I gave you nearly everything,
I almost gave you my all...
the one thing I had only for myself.
I almost willed myself to you in entirety.
You owe me money,
You owe me compassion,
You owe me promises yet fulfilled,
You owe me the truth.
I gave up my fairytale love for you.
I let you taint that for me.
I believed you were worth it.
I believed you were better for me.
I believed you wouldn't lie to me.
Ha....
Oh, what a fool I have been.
A fool that I was oblivious to.
A fool those who DO love me,
tried to get me to realize.
Oblivious to the deceit.
Oblivious to the pain I will endure.
Oblivious to the obvious lies.
Oblivious to the ignorance.
I never thought I'd have to hurt again.
I never thought that I'd ever be fooled.
I never thought that you would be that way.
I never thought I'd lie to believe lies.
I want you to know,
that you are so good at your game.
You even had me fooled;
I believed you told the truth.
Author notes
Option B, but D, E, and F can go as well.
the name means false
I may change the title later...maybe not.
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Comments
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wow.
truly amazing.
this is..i cant describe it.
but i love it.
thanks for entering.
good luck.
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this was very good you did a wonderful job at expressing your feelings,i do hope things get better.
good luck in the contest and thank you for entering. -
i like the way you penned this and you have captured deep and effective emotions within your words. they express the prompt beautifully
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wow hun. I really lked this. now I gotta see what options you chose and whatnot.
this could be going towards Josh, ya know?? seems like what you would say to him.. to me anyways.
welp - hope you win! I know you would love that to happen
~Lovens~
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