You say the perfect words
At exactly the right time
Taking me from
The lowest lows
To the highest highs
And leave me soaring
Through the golden brown horizons
Of your eyes
I'm left in Awe
As your fingertips
Trace along my skin
And you whisper
The perfect words
So all my worries disappear
And I'm free
Like the wind
Sailing the currents of your soul
Tranquil, beautiful and clear
And on my darkest days
When the tears fall like rain
You say the perfect words
And make it all ok
Yes, you say the perfect words
The perfect words
When you say you love me
Author notes
my god wow i wrote something.
Please tell me what you think
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And write something you did!!!
Awesome, my dear, just plain AWESOME!!
I love the way you merge the emotion and imagery into a whole, flowing so easily.. A perfect read..
More, please...
We missed you, here on AP..
All my Love n Hugz xx Ev
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yes!! oh nell, this is marvelous and sweetly dark..like expensive chocolate. especially "through the golden brown horizons of your eyes". I feel like if everything in life were described like this I would feel that much more complete
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*Claps sarcasticlly* Bout time! No, seriouly good to see such a happy, lovely poem from you too! You gotta tell me more, tell me more.. I want details! hehehe
(CWM)
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It's nice to have someone in your life like this chickie, someone who can take those blues away... Sooooo nice to see something from you sis...
Karen
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