You tell me one thing;
she'll tell me another.
I don't know which way to turn.
I don't know who to believe.
I used to be able to trust but now...
who do I know who to trust?
This isn't just a simple problem
it's more complicated than that.
Both of you tell me
different things.
I don't know who to listen to...
I don't know who I can trust?
I'm confused and hurt
both of you keep pushing your stories on me.
I don't want to hurt you;
but neither of you are giving me any choice.
Doesn't look like I can trust anyone.
Author notes
Prompt F) for chars contest!
A contest entry
- But you.... by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended February 4, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like it..
i can relate to this at this moment..
is a good poem keep it up -
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Thanks!
I fully intend to!
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is this about anyone i know fayeness? i can relate to this though as its a powerful with strength and mind in this
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...perhaps. Not really something I'm comfortable talking about.
Thanks!
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This one doesn`t really feel like a poem, it`s more like something that shall be narrated. To me, it also feels as if there is a certain feeling or power lacking, something that makes it stand out...
Funny thing is that I can relate to it a lot, so from that point of view I do understand why you`ve written it this way.
Keep writing, contests aren`t easy !
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thanks for your input. Meh sometimes I have that problem where my stuff doesn't flow as well as it should.
Still thank you!
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