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For My Dear Friend Mindie






May all of your hopes and dreams come true my friend
In your eyes and heart I have learned so much about you
Never forget how special you are here
Don't ever let anyone take advantage and walk all over you
If you ever need a friend to talk to, remember that I'll always be here
Even in your darkest hour, I'll try my best to make you smile


I see the sadness written on your face,
and it worries me to see you this way.
I hope that deep inside you are strong and healthy,
and I know that you'll get through this somehow someday.

Go out and make some new friends,
people who will stand beside you through it all.
Find someone who will listen and understand,
and will always be there for you when you call.

Don't believe the rumors that are spread,
some people just don't have anything else better to do.
Remember inside that you are someone special,
and that no one can ever take that away from you.

Break down those walls that hold you,
free yourself from the madness in your life.
Deep inside you deserve so much more,
leave behind your worries, anger, and strife.

Look at your reflection in the mirror each day,
and say something positive to make yourself smile.
Be who you are and not what others want you to be,
never lose your great attitude and lovely style.

Find some new inspiration in the world,
go out and discover something new.
Breathe in and embrace the love and laughter,
that people continuously give to you.

Don't be afraid to reach out for help,
if you don't ask then you'll never receive.
Don't limit yourself and be satisfied with where you are,
you still have so much to discover and achieve.

With every breath you take always remember,
wherever you are and wherever you go.
There are always people that will accept you for you,
and in more ways than you can imagine they will help you grow.

Take care of yourself my friend,
and always shoot for the highest star.
Tell yourself that you can do it,
and all of your hopes and dreams won’t be too far.

Good luck to you Mindie in everything that you do,
I hope that this poem has helped to inspire you.
Please read it whenever you are feeling down,
and I’m sure that in due time your world will turn back around.








































Author notes

Here you go Mindie, take care!
I wish you all the best!

Me!

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Comments

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  • sonia 77
    November 20
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    Good encouragement dear friend !!

  • bleeeeee
    March 14
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    hi

    yah your right there is sadness in her face................i really like your poems it makes me wanna OMG ohhhhhhhh incredibl

  • bleeeeee
    March 14

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    yah your right there is sadness in her face................i really like your poems it makes me wanna OMG ohhhhhhhh incredibl


  • Joseph Hollis
    November 22, 2008

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    A wonderfully poetic tribute to your dear friend. I enjoyed the subtle rhyme scheme and lovely message this piece conveys. Well penned.

  • celadia
    November 21, 2008

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    You've really covered everything with this poem, I would be reading and thinking, but he didn't mention...and then, there it was. I hope when you reached out to your friend she grabbed on and saved herself, congrats on the gold.


  • Rheea gold member
    October 7, 2008
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    Words of wisdom for a young woman. You are a sweet understanding man.


  • Camille Morin gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    What a beautiful, sensitive poetic message to your friend. She is a lucky girl. This is an excellent poem.
    Sincerely,
    Camille Morin

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    August 16, 2008

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    Hello Jeremy0826.

    A very touching tribute to a friend, really shows the character of the writer as well as for the person it was written for. It has good advice in it, but more importantly, it has a friend in it. From her response, it definitely touched her. I would congratulate you on the Gold Trophy, but it got something a lot more valuable than that, but it is representative of what it got, so well done.

    My regards.

    Edit: Bad grammar, had to fix it, ahahha.


  • amberly353
    July 20, 2008
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    sorry i put aclifornia I was going to say california!
    I hope you win the contest!

  • amberly353
    July 20, 2008

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    nice!!!! you have lots of Imagination
    you live in aclifornia???
    me tooo!!! hahahahaha
    hey you know what I thought grown up's didn't have any imagination( well that's what they say ) but you do!!! great job!


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    January 31, 2008

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    Tears are rolling....

    omg..
    Jeremy...
    This is sooo sweet...
    I really do have tears!! Happy tears of course!
    Its soo nice to know that people do care about me and to have a friend as wonderful, handsome, carring, and funny as you...I am honored!!

    Thank you soo much for taking the time to write this amazingly wonderful piece for me!
    I will definitely be reading it every time I feel down because this totally made me feel sooo warm inside!
    Wow..

    Thank you...for writing this, for being my friend, for caring, for taking the time to get to know the real me..even tho u may not know everything yet..thank you!

    Your friend for life,

    L-R-P

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