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Backyard Hills

       
    Hills stood silent
Time incessantly running forward
    Hills against time.

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 20, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry. I can see some what, what you have, though I'm not sure what time of the year it is. Your counts are off, though there is 17 syllables total. I appreciate your entry, thank you Ken IBT


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    Great Haiku Dear
    RedwingSpirit

    I wish you the best of luck.