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i'll never stop

if i could forget
that i lived for a moment in this life
i would whisk you away from this fear i know
how can i make you believe
that theirs a dream worth hoping for...
how can i make you see that my thoughts,
are filled with your face
composing shymthponies
your lips and eyes form a line between the here
and now...

these day'z are consumed with us remembering
what we never had
is their a day when the moon and sun didn't believe
in enternity
a bond that they hold over life living a world
were everyone didn't need...
lets just say we are better off
not knowing on how much
time we've left, watching it flow

away from what we could be...

maybe i can gain some control
and just let this moment go..
how easy could it be.......

Just tell me to stop being me....
let me just lose control, and i'll let you know
that i'll never stop needing to believe....

that theirs more than life

than wanting to be seen...

 

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  • Shancy Fayre
    February 1, 2008

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    There are several mistakes in the poem. It feels a little scattered. Perhaps it just isn't the type of poem I enjoy. Shancy.