Buds below zero
Cascading crystals persist,
Blanket; still cozy
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
pic:www.solar-electric.com/images/airx2.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful imagery and thoughts, good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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Thank you Ken for the wonderful HM and the inspirational haiku contest! This was fun and I hope to see another one from you soon!
Love Linda
xoxo
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Excellent Haiku form!
Your last line could be taken a few ways.
{Reading into the lack of warmth}nice twist
Good luck
Adam
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Wow what beautiful Haiku, such vivid picture!
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Short but not sharp, a concise write with imagery and impact, it stands alone without the picture yet compliments the picture. Good usage of form dearest poetess.
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I wanna be there!!!
This is an incredibly awesome haiku you have written here! I can envision the whole scene very vividly, as it takes me back to my childhood days(of yesteryear not yesterday
)Thank you for sharing this wonderful, wintry piece with us and best of luck in the contest! This truly is a winner in my eyes!
Don
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Interesting piece here! I love the
thought that you put into this one.
Well done and good luck to you with
it in this contest! Thanks a lot
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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