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you are my sunshine

you are my sunshine
during the rain
you are my sunshine
in the middle of the night
when i start to give up this fight
you are my sunshine
so cuddly and cute
amazing and true
my sunshine
my rainbow
my star of each tomorrow
my guiding light of day
my night light at midnight
you are my sunshine
my only sunshine
during the rain
in the morning
at night
you are my sunshine
so cuddly and so cute
so amazing and so true
oh how much i'd give to have a friend like you
to bright my dull days
to fill my life with joy
you are my sunshine
the only sunshine bear!!!!!!

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Option 1...Sunshine Bear

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  • Jarrod
    February 25, 2008
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    hahah this was cute

  • davidwright silver member
    February 19, 2008

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    It's a very happy poem one you don't see often enough and lots of fun to read. Good job and happy trail.


  • Perception
    February 17, 2008

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    Awwww... This is such a light lovely piece... It is sooo cuteee! I want a sunshine bear! hehehe... The colors kinda hurt the eye though...

    But cute little write you've got here


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 17, 2008

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    KIds love the Carebears and you have penned an easy to red and understand poem that all can love. Cute. Liked the flow and message you share in these lines.


  • Beverlynohime
    February 3, 2008
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    Please make it easier to read...and um... option in authors notes! Please and thank you!

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