Take our hand, the one held out to set you free,
Heaven wont forsake you, neither will we.
Easier said than done, this I know.
Can you finally let the Drugs and Alcohol go?
Our program is simple for complicated souls,
Unusual in that we lose all control.
Rage at the world and all it has done to us,
Actually it's all our fault, realizing this is a plus.
God or whatever you might call Him, is the answer,
Even if you don't know how to turn it over to prayer.
Total courage to stay sober no matter what it takes,
Ordinary? not hardly, we make many mistakes.
Confidence is gained, as sober days accrue,
His will works in our lives no matter what we do.
Always remember there is a way out,
No reason to stay drunk, there is no doubt.
Go to a meeting, get yourself free,
Expecting nothing in return but your sobriety.
Author notes
If you think you might have a problem with Alcohol or Drugs, chances are that you do.
Call your local AA / NA office and find a meeting near you to find out for yourself.
Don't listen for the differences in the stories, listen for the similarities. Don't leave 5 minutes before the miracle happens.
Hi, I'm Scott and I'm an Alcoholic / Addict
Love you Tory
Please tell me what you think
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This is an encouraging and optimistic poem written against alcohol and drug addiction.
God's blessings do give strength.
Hope you are recovering from your alcohol addiction.
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I found that the instructional format detracted from a sense of sincerity that could've made the poem endearing, if nothing else, as there is no imagery to speak of, and the rhythm and rhyme are mediocre at best. Sorry if it's not what you want to hear, but it is valid constructive criticism. Add some sincere emotion with which to draw in the reader and make them care. That's the best suggestion I could offer. -
this was just a grand poem . it is one that is fill with hope. i did so enjoy this poem, i say bravo to you. i hope hat you will have grand day
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Wow..This was amazing. Most people dont admit they are addicts. I have a contest running now about addicting to drugs. this would be gold right here.lol. But nice job, well done.
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i have a friend who in bill W ... so gave a copy of this piece of art .. well done he personal want me to thank you .. thanks for sharing
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there is a powerful mesage in this write of yours! I'm glad you put God as the real source of help, and AA has its' beneits also. happy to know that you have overcome yourself!!
SilverButterfly
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Very nice, very true.
In this life we so need guidance from above. Guidance that we cannot give ourselves being imperfect because our wills' are flawed. Wisdom is found in a multitude of wise counsel so as long as one is held accountable to his brother or sister there is hope as they will not allow you to fall if their efforts are excepted.
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Powerful, you really are a strong man. Stay the course because you are an inspiration to everyone that knows you, everyone that reads this, and every one that will hear of you. Im only 19 but i started drinking and doing other things at a very young age and everyday i look back and regret every second of it. I am an extremely intelligent kid and i look back on all of that and think of how ignorant i was..but im clean today and have been for a while. Im a straight edge kid now, no drugs, no alcohol, nothing harmful will ever enter my body due to my stupidity again and im glad. i dont regret becoming clean at all. I must say your words inspire me and everyone else..
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this is a beautifully penned piece of strength faith and encouragemnet. and your words warm hearts. truly beautiful dad
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a very well penned acrostic. It's just so powerful. made me need to read it again. I really enjoyed this poem it speaks out... very well written, well done xxxx
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I really like this. There is a lot of truth packed into this acrostic. I got started in recovery back in '85 and I have no regrets. And I was already clean by then! It has been a great ride and your acrostic reminds me of so many good things about it.
I am glad that you wrote it.
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wonderful poem
just what I needed to hear even though I don't drink or do drugs I'm facing some things myself and change is a big part of it
Roses to you
Teresa
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Dear Griswold
Nice acrostic! Great message!
Easy Does It!
John
A Friend of Bill's
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Powerful! Powerful! Powerful!
Using your poetic words to inspire and bring hope, a bright and warm light of a poem to enjoy!
Thankyou for the fearless courage and bold words it took
to write this reaching poem!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen/Seattle.
better days and wonderous adventures await, and the
beauty is...we do not have to walk them alone!
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well indeed a busy beaver.
well done here and the acrostic was done nicely.
what a job we have reaching out to others and well,
sometimes.....its like wow....
great job.
Love,
Tory
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If we can reach just one honey it makes it all worthwhile. More is better, but one is enough. Love you...
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Well indeed more is better, when you work with the right people. Its when you dont that the whole shit and kaboodle falls out of the bag.
Well indeed as usual, i am sure you will receive the attention you seek..
it was a great piece.
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