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Once

It was that hot summer day
That turned into a blissful evening
As the sun sank behind the trees
And we had to pull out the flashlights to see
We rolled with laughter
As the grass stained our skin
With its beautiful hue of green

We sat around the stone table
Told stories of how we all met
So gently you pushed back my hair
And gave me the slightest kiss
Upon the apple of my cheek
Right on the dimple from a childhood long forgotten
It was that moment that I knew
This is right

For once
This is right
It was you all along

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  • tomisb
    February 8, 2008

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    Lovely tale of love awakened for it had probably been sleeping in your heart long before. This is and idyll that rises above mere romance to a greater quality, perhaps more like a hymn.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Unsigned gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Stunning

    I really enjoyed this great visuals, loved the way she/he made you feel like a child again. I hope you get to roll in te grass and laugh like your characters.......


  • Star Shine
    February 8, 2008
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    That is a perfect description of "recognizing" your soulmate. Wonderful.