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My Little

I picture you, it's fall, and you're swinging with a smile.
Your blue eyes light up like the moon lights the night.
My little how I love you,
how I counted down the days
'til I'd hold you in my arms,
I'd fall in love right away. Not a day goes by,
that I don't think about you.
I stop and think a lot, when I look at little kids running and playing.
I think to myself what it would've been like,
and how you would've changed me.
How you would've melted my heart and,
how I would've done anything in the world for you.
I don't want you to think I forgot you sweetie,
because I never will. I see you in my dreams sometimes,
and I see you in her eyes, your mommy.
I wonder what you would've looked like,
but I have a little bit of an idea. Gosh, you were so beautiful;
I would have loved to be your daddy.
I would've loved being protective, and scaring boys away,
I would love teaching you and holding you,
reading to you and cuddling with you.
Helping you know that you are special,
and that you deserve nothing but the best.
I wouldn't have ever let anything happen to you;
I'd fight for you and never give up.
I would always be there; I'd hold you when you cried,
and take care of you when you're sick.
It gives me chills just thinking about you,
you would have been my little girl and no one can take you from me,
not even to this day. I know I'll never see you little,
but you live on in my heart,
and I love you very much.

I will never stop.

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  • nobody knows me
    February 23, 2008
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    Thankyou for entering my contest good luck x


  • bobfoot1990
    February 13, 2008
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    i like it
    i think it expresses the authors feelings


  • LostInTheDream
    January 31, 2008

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    Amazing

    The whole thing is just awesome, every little drop of it hit me harder and harder... Keep up the good work!!!


  • Cherry Hades
    January 30, 2008

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    This is wonderful, right down to the very last line.
    You would make a great Daddy.
    I would normally point out something that stood out to me in the poem...The whole piece is just wonderful.
    I've now read it about 5 times. lol
    You're the best.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 30, 2008

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    This speaks of the greatest loss, I believe, the loss of knowing one's child, of being present in their life.
    I ponder the circumstances: separation from mother, adoption, abortion where you were not given a say, miscarriage.

    Whatever the circumstance, Loss is certain. Well written. I know this background is available to all, and I know who designed it. For this contest, you need to design your own background which fits this piece. And you must be a member of Poetic Artists or GraphicOholics.

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