To catch a thief when he has stole
My prodigy, my spirit and my soul
I will set a trap that is perpetually deep
Multi-faceted and horrendously steep
He shall fall unaware
Into my webbed Spiders Lair
The more he struggles to be free
The more ensnared will he be
Wrapping himself in a cocoon of deceit
The pain he has caused he will reap
His once born soul shall scream in agony
As his own mind forms the cruelest of irony
For he will become his own greatest fears
Over and over; a reflection of mirrors
Time without end; his darkness eternal
Creator of his own hell fire inferno
To catch a thief when he has stole
My prodigy, my spirit and my soul
His own arrogance will be his undoing
Earning his reward three fold ensuing
By the Power of Three
In the Quarters of Four
Above and Below; So Shall It Be!
Coast to Coast; Shore to Shore!
So I Will! So Mote It Be!
Author notes
D r a g o n B l u e
In a list
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- Dark/Pain/Personal • next in list
- Dedication - Gifts of the Heart • next in list
- Trophies, Silver • next in list
A contest entry
- A Reason To Kill by Girl With Guitar.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful write, so powerful and strong. Keep up the awesome work. I wish you the best of luck in my contest and thank you for entering this piece. I really liked the lines:
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Wrapping himself in a cocoon of deceit
The pain he has caused he will reap
His once born soul shall scream in agony
As his own mind forms the cruelest of irony"
Blessed Be and Merry Meet
*~*bee*~* -
Very evocative in both flow and force...
you breathe fire into this verse,
and the pain here is palpitable. Blue
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"He shall fall unaware
Into my webbed Spiders Lair
The more he struggles to be free
The more ensnared will he be"
I love those lines! It literally puts the predator in the victims shoes and changes the dynamics. Brilliant.
The flow, passion, language and attitude to this is simply amazing. Just what I'm looking for!
Thank you for the entry 
♥Bandaid
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