So alone... and no one needs you.
Can you feel as cold as I do?
Is there a way to become new,
...And unused?
She dreams of him...
I dream of her...
But I'm not the one she sees.
I'm unclean!
Not good enough to be,
Part of something.
So I stare at the moon,
I'd be there soon.
Because that can't be,
As cold as me!
And I give up.
I fall to my knees.
And waste away...
I fall to my knees,
And waste away!
Pain will fade,
I can't be seen.
Because nobody's home.
I find myself alone!
I find myself alone...
With you.
Author notes
Heartbreak. I wrote this poem after my 8th grade love tore my heart out. (You won't be seeing many more emo poems on here!)
A contest entry
- Love/Heartbreak by DeathlyAngel.
450 points, ended January 31, 2008, 17 entries
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wow awesome poem. i love it. i really loved the lines
Pain will fade,
I can't be seen.
Because nobody's home.
I find myself alone!
i definitely will be reading more of your work in the future.
xxundeadxtearsxx
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WOW
This is really great. Great job. Good luck
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THANK YOU!!
Haha. Thank you so much!!
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you wrote this when you were 13??
ow old are you know??
btw,, great poem and awesome work,, -
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Thanks!
I am 16, going on 17. Thanks for the comment!
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