It Comes in Pairs
Two lips, two lovers, two lies
all wrapped in one gleaming smile
Two sets of feet dancing the
slow sad tune of heartbreak
Two eyes gleaming, evil
portals to the Abyss
One last glance,
then goodbye.
Forever Gone
There's a flash in the soul
with the glint of a knife
there's the darkness of hell
caught up in a life
there's a sweet surrender
amidst the strife
and the chaos is thick
and the chaos is rife
Author notes
Slept So Long (Orgy)
1. I see hell in your eyes.
2. I've killed a million petty souls, but I could't kill you.'.
NOTE: Actually, BOTH of my poems are here, simply for convenience. That way, if one of them wins, I'll get the points for it and the host of the contest doesn't have to waste time opening two poems. That...and my computer has been freezing today so I am lucky to get this page to come up once....
username: twilight seduction
poems entered: 2. Both listed here. Both use the Orgy lyrics. The first poem uses 1, the second, 2.
A contest entry
- Double the Lyrics by Morrigan Trinity.
525 points, ended January 31, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what this makes you feel
Comments
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Interesting rhythimic device. It coincides well with the visible structure of the poem. It was a fun read.
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Thanks for offering convenience. I can't believe I didn't think of that before.
These really fit the lyrics. They're both really good, but I like the second poem best.
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