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All You Wanted Was...

And all I ever hear is ay ya ya ya ya
You're talking way too much
I can't even hear me now
All this noise is messing with my head
You're in my head, get outta my head...


                  ~Ashlee Simpson, Get Outta My Head (Ay ya ya)

You say all you do
is be kind and true
but thats nothing new;
you're sticking like glue
What is there to say
you never want to be away
now the skies are turning gray;
I don't want you to stay
You talk, and talk, and laugh too loud
wherever we go, you draw a crowd
You going out in public shouldn't be allowed;
Why are you following me? You never vowed!!
Now you're in my head,
when I lay in bed,
you've become widespread;
with every word you've said

Please back far, far, FAR away,
you're words are starting to decay
I didn't want to end up this way;

FINE! YOU WIN! TAKE MY SORBET!!

Author notes

hehe.... they like sorbet.

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  • StarIlluminated
    January 30, 2008
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    hahaha good ending..and good rhyming poem you don't do a lot of those.
    *KT*


  • DeadlyTurnip
    January 30, 2008
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    this isn't about me, is it? *hangs head* if it is i'll back off, lol

    good poem!!


  • LuckyBlackCat
    January 30, 2008
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    coo surprise ending..nice job