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My Little Pride and Joy

my little pride and joy,
is gonna be a doctor,

of course i asked her,
but she said artist.

of course she's kidding!
how silly she can be.

my little pride and joy,
is gonna go to Yale,

of course i asked her,
but she said art school.

of course she's kidding!
how silly she can be.

my little pride and joy,
will never mess up again.

of course i asked her,
but she said she's only human.

of course she's kidding!
how silly she can be.


Did you ask your little pride and joy,
what she wanted?

Of course you didn't!
You only care about you.

That's why she ran away today...

What do you think of your little pride and joy now?

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  • thedarkestjolly
    May 6, 2008
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    It is a good poem but I have seen many like this anyways good luck


  • tinydarkgoddess
    February 4, 2008

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    Deep and emotional in such few lines, thank you for sharing and taking the time to enter the contest. You work is very good, it is a shame that this sort of thing happens to children.
    ~Katrina


  • RunningFromReality
    January 31, 2008
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    awww its so deep! but so true, so many parents tend to do this to their children...