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better that way

I hate you with a passion,
I wish that you would die.
I can't stand to be around you
So I try to stay away.

Don't try to say you love me.
Don't try that little lie.
I know you really hate me,
So deeply inside.

I want you to know how I feel.
but I can't find the words.
I can't wait for these last few years,
when I'm gone and on my own,
Far away from you.

For some reason you won't listen to me.
Have you ever loved me?
Or was it all just an act?

How did we get to this point,
where we hate each other so much?

I liked it so much before.
Back when I wanted to be at home,
and was planning on staying there forever.

I wish we could go back
to when it was home sweet home
I liked it better that way.

Author notes

I wrote this right after a HUGE!!! fight with my mum/grandma (whom I live with)

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  • Polkadot Cadaver
    January 30, 2008

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    very good write..lots of rage and emotion...makes me want to break something ..keep up the good writes