Feeling more and more like shit
little ticking inside my head
Screaming: you're just shit
Fucking loser
All you've become
You fucking loser
I'm cold and burning inside
Feel like I'm nothing
ticking screams
you're just shit
fucking loser
All you've become
You fucking loser
Author notes
Suoiroton Aibrutsid
A contest entry
- xx.[LET THE BODIES HIT THE FLOOR];; by chasing rainbows.
300 points, ended February 13, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Here's my lullaby: Pray for rain, lose your name and watch all your dreams fall through...hush now, don't you cry...
Comments
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well...i see now that your violent side is spilling out of you...thats great....oh, and i love the title...it explains the whole poem and gives you a sample of what you should be expecting from the pem itself...love it....dark aggressive side...scary but great...i lve it...great....
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perfect.
ove it.
thanks.
xx Sin -
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you're welcome.
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lol
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Thats one way to get your comments up for this poem. That cracked me up [find a cassie 400] LOL
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haha thanks...i think?
are you saying that my poem is so shitty, that i could not possibly get any comments on it if i wasn't so witty? -
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no, not shitty at all. and the comments, i'm sure you'll get many more. i liked it and the comaderie between you two, had me in stitches. Nice write
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oh...okay. i get it now...
yeah, we're like this *holds up fingers*
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nice
sounds like a parent to an angry child.... -
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hmm...i never thought of that.
it's from the song fucking loser by bile. -
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*shrugs*
that'st just what it reminded me of.... -
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and i'm not saying it's wrong. i'm just saying i never thought of it like that...
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suuuure, you're not
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*throws a pillow at you*
ya best believe it, betch! -
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*throws it back*
jerkface!
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cheater-pants!
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liar liar plants for higher!
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that's not the way you say it...it's liar liar PANTS ON FIRE!
-Well, You would know! -
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no, you would know, jerkface!
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THAT IS IT!
IMMA TICKLE YOU!!! -
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AH!
*runs away and hides* you'll never find e now! -
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HAHAH! that's what you think!!!
I just got this! You're going to LOVE it...to death...*snickers*
*opens box*
I present...dananduh! the find-a-cassie-400! It can find a cassie within 400 feet of itself...hince the name!
w00t!!! -
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*laughs*
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haha. that's what i thunk!
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yeah, well, i thunk it first!
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*pushes button and the cassie-finder tickles you*
Be nice...or i'll make you regret being tiny and ticklish!! -
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jerkface! -
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i...sowwy?
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