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Tiny Tot

Brows rose,
cried aloud
- but mucky mom
Busy at kitchen

A contest entry

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  • james119
    March 13, 2008
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    this brings smiles


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 30, 2008

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    hehe. I like this one... quite sweet. well written, another different take on the prompt, well done. Best of luck to you. xxx


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    awwwww


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 30, 2008
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    cute take on the prompt, made me smile. best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 30, 2008

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    Very cute This was a wonderful take on the prompt I wish you the best of luck with it. Redwing Spirit


  • creationsfromheart
    January 30, 2008
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    cute remeber them days , thats why I got only one...

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