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Like the Pyre

Lover, loving,
burning the heart.
Relinquished from hoping.
Quelled by the start.

Relentless, intent less,
always the slack.
Hiding the letters.
Turning my back.

Loather, loathing,
Cold as the start.
My pyre now burning.
An ode to my heart.

We are now one crying, screaming, singing being.

Let me love you.
Let me loath you.
Let me miss you.
Let me burn.

Author notes

This was thought about for quite a while. I had to describe exactly what this person meant and did to me. I think I explained myself well, but please leave opinions, they will be greatly appreciated.

I would love all comments and I'm very open to consructive critizism...

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  • Red Death
    January 30, 2008
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    Wow Shadow, I never knew you felt this way, awesome poem.