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Thunder

My heart melts when I see you,
I need you,
You're my thunder baby,
Life's taken me down so many roads,
That lead nowhere,
And made no sense,
Until the road lead to you,
You'll always be my thunder.

Your eye so bright they shine like stars,
Your voice so beautiful like whispers on the wind,
Baby, you'll always be my thunder.

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Inspired by Thunder by Boys Like Girls.
And the single most important person in my life, Lewis.

It's all I got.

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  • live2love2write
    January 31, 2008

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    aw...this made me want to cry!

    awww this is such a beautiful poem. it makes me want to cry when i read it. beautiful job. absolutly loved it.


  • alexandra.
    January 30, 2008

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    I just listened to it - I'm loving it, the poem and the song both!

    great write once again, loved the last 3 lines

    ILY
    xxx