Supple breasts set afire.
Erect nipples are his desire.
His mouth waters
As he licks his lips.
wanting to suckle her nipples
And sway her hips.
Smooth skin glistening with sweat
In the firelight.
He runs his hand over her budding desires.
His fingers linger
Then slide down her stomach.
He touches her with no regret.
With his desire - She is set on fire
Grabbing his hard manhood
Slowly caressing what she so longs for.
Lowering herself down
Using her tongue
Tracing his stomach
To what her waiting mouth so desires.
He moans with desire
His manhood hard, awaiting her lips
As she slides him into her mouth
He arches his back and grabs her hips.
No longer can he wait
Pulling her to him.
He enters her with full force
Warm, forbidden desire
He is set afire.
Feeling as though he is soaring
As if an eagle taking flight
He releases
She lunges and as she is singing praise
She releases
A euphoric feeling surrounds them both
As they sleep.
Author notes
Prayers
A contest entry
- Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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yuh, still turns me on haha
amazing write -
Very visual!!!
I felt as if I was your desire here...."Feeling as though he is soaring"...wow awesome
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well, i'm judging this contest, and wanted to add a bit more of a comment...
i wish i had more than one gold to give out! i've got so many great pieces entered!
mike -
Heavy Breathing Reading
Sizzling, sensational sensuality,
the passionate play 'tween lovers...
"He moans with desire
His manhood hard, awaiting her lips
As she slides him into her mouth
He arches his back and grabs her hips."
I needs a cold shower, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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very good piece here!
thank you for entering my contest, and good luck~ -
Wow...I need to find my man...lol
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I like what you have done here. I'll come back and read this again before the close.
Good luck & thank you
Aden Recreated
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Wwwaaaaaa Very bad girl! (OMG)
a prayer? Nice done!
I see you improve yourself in every direction.
Good luck in the contest!
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wow...hot stuff there
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WOWA
Now thats hot! all I can say I need some ice wowa!
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AHhhhh Naughty girl bad bad bad. lol Oh we all are sometimes. This was a well written piece. Now I need my husband lol. Great Write and I wish you the best of luck with it in the contest.
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