You break promises,
you don't care,
even before time
when we were there.
You have no feeling
towards another,
you are cold
we now hate each other.
Don't look at me,
you get away,
from now on
you cannot stay.
If you could change
that would be good,
don't break promises
it's not understood.
A promise lost
and gone forever,
in my arms?
I will say never.
Author notes
poetess12
Someone, I won't say who, broke a special promise with me. He is a cold person and he didn't even care about it in the first place. When someone promises to be with you and then leaves for somebody else it is a broken promise.
Even if it was a promise made before time.
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I must say your poem flowed very well...although it must have bin a sad time for you...It's always hard when someone leaves you for somebody else...Unfortunitly I know all about it myself...
I know at that point no words can make it better...
only to find love again can do that...
I hope you did,
Good luck in my contest
XXJeannette
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