i want to feel pain
i am the one
i like to feel things so i can have expirenced it
i want to feel rape so i know how they feel
i want to be paralyzed so i know how they feel
i want to die so i know how they feel
i can't have enough
i want to know how they feel
i want to know how they feel at any cost
shiver of my spine thoughts swirl my mind
i feel bad for them
but i want to feel worse
i don't have enough pain
i feel what its like to be me
but you don't
i can't say ive felt pain like most
but i can say i want to
Author notes
this poem is not about me feeling sorry for people it is about me wanting to feel how they feel
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So,
This is how i feel,though i have been through alot.and i mean alot.Dont wanna feel what others feel,in the end you will just feel more sorry for them.When someone is hurt be there for them,rather that feel sorry.Because they need someone to be there.Take it from someone knows,from experiance.I wish i had someone who cared and not just someone who wants to feel sorry.Believe,the pain is so strong you will never be able to escape it.But this is a great write and i hope you dont take this the wrong way.Im not trying to be blunt,im just stating whats true.You are an amazing writer.;]
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in my friends words," Don't be sorry for us, it's annoying. Just be glad you didn't have to go through any of it."
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do you really understand how i think or are you geussing from this piece i want to know how it feels so i can live outside my world i have to expierence things in every way i can't be happy just hearing about it it makes me feel dead not knowing
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Im guessing
i have no idea what you hv gone through, and i've had a couple things happen to me, but my friends life is still screwed. In my comment those are words that she has said to anyone who has ever tried to feel what shes feeling if they hvnt gone through it themselves.
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