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Clear,
the skies
and a new year
rising,
the eyes,
unsheathed,
slice hazed horizons.
Knowing freedom,
enlightened gazes
lead
all smiles
into peace.
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please, let me know what YOU think
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peace
you write with enlightenment and a halo
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There is something lovely ...
and refined in the way your phrase your poems ... and even before I read the gentleness and the very sensitive way in which you write, the visuality of the words, so neatly placed, and carefully chosen, touched me.
How clear your clarity of speech!
Love
Myra
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All smiles into peace. A new year of freedom on the horizon. Wonderful short little poem. But so profound! ~Sie
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There is light all over this writ! Brevity always amazes me when it speaks so "clearly" A beautiful entry! Thank you dear friend for taking the time to enter my contest. This is a rarity! I know you usually do not post contest entries. I truly feel honored. I wish you the very best in this challenge and this "new beginning" called life.
All My Love ♥
Renee
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Short and sweet very beautifully written
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This reflects the light of inner peace and a clean slate...This is uplifting and gives me a wonderful feeling of light on this cloudy day in Texas...
I love this...
Lynda
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Thank you, Lynda, i am glad my poem was able to brighten your day, may all skies clear for you. blessings and best wishes,
~r.
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I found peace in that picture as well. Though you don't enter contest anymore, I am glad you changed your mind for this one. A beautiful write.
Kelli
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Kelli, i appreciate you comment here on 'clear' and truly love your poem better than mine. blessings and best wishes,
~r.
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