"It is Ravenous!"
Its hunger unfulfilled
It must hunt its prey
Its craving, it must fill
This very day
"It is the Hunter!"
Searching out the site
Must set its pace
Needs must be met tonight
Go to the place
"It is Approaching!"
Nearing to its goal
Its eyes are fixated
Pick out one from the whole
Its senses elated
"It has Selected!"
Singled out the unsuspecting
The one to fill its need
Success, it is expecting
The one on which to feed
"It is Preparing!"
Inching forward to get close
Stealth---Anticipation
This one, it wants the most
Successful expectation
"It's now Attacking!"
Its needs to be fed
Now is the time
It raises its head
and says "HI!"--"WHAT'S YOUR SIGN??"
Author notes
*pic. courtesy of Photobucket.com
The eternal "conquest"!--Being a musician and playing in many bars and clubs over the years, I've seen this action countless times---and "Lived" it!
Male or Female---The "Hunt" is on!
In a list
A contest entry
- BRING Y0UR BEST by DAMSELx.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 38 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell me a Story by TabbyCat.
750 points, ended April 2, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
I truly enjoyed reading this.
Thank you.
I loved how you kept the REAL shocker for the end.
Caught me off guard.
LOL
Congratulations on your Silver and Honourable Mention trophies.
Very well deserved.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us.
*S* Cynthia -
Outstanding
Wow! This is so well written! What a Winner.
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ah! This must be me today!
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lol this is cute, refreshing and cute 0 glad I got to read it
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Loved this. You painted the picture well of a continual quest, and loved your page, of course. It is perfect.
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Sucked me into a blood hungry hunt then flipped real hard at the end.....unexpected but funny...Great write
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HAHAHA!!!! That last line was a killer!!!! I loved this whole piece, it's amazing. At first you almost had me in a panic attack but then I saw where you were going... LOL. I just loved this!
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I laughed until I swallowed my chewing gum shesh
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Hilarious ending after such a suspenseful write. Love it.
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Ha Ha!, LOL that's funnier than a one legged Duck, I absolutely did not see that coming, Nice Job man.
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I'm afraid, lol
Very well expressed
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Excellent
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And here I thought you were talking about a snake.
Sneaky bugger.
LOL
Truly amazing talent you have here my friend.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful talents.
*S* Cynthia
P.S.
Congrats on your Silver Trophy win.
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LMFAO thats too funny the ending
here i thought it was a HARSH Killer LOl
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lol
i loved the twist on your ending
you had me going
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interesting piece, interesting feel I get from it also
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Hello there and thanks for entering my contest your piece is very creative and very well written. Best of luck to you and thanks again for entering.
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lol, at first this seems to be something something intince, as some one lurking in the shadows, then the twist at the end just is too funny, brings a whole new life to this piece...Thanks for the wonderful read and congrats on the silver
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SILVER WINNER
CONGRATS ON SILVER!
Your poem encased everything that this contest was about!
Your words were amazing, your flow was superb...I just all around enjoyed your write!
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
What a wonderful piece!!!
I truly had NO idea that this is where the poem was going....how incredibly creative....I LOVED every minute of this write....
I mean honestly, you did an amazing job...
Thank you for entering, BEST OF LUCK!!!!
--DAMSELx
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Thank You
Just a note to thank you for your comments on--
"The Hunter" and thank you for running such an interesting contest with a "Twist"!-- "The Hunter" came to mind immediately!---Need a laugh?? -- Click Link---->
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3884557
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LMAO Like Susan said intense till the end even the tone of it. This is Great. heres some happy mooses for ya.
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this seemed like such a intence write than ending it with a smile I love this lol -
Very good and so true love the form you have placed these words in brings out the flow great imagery
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Like this poem very much
what a twist at the end that is great
You should read The Hunted that I wrote
hugs Julie
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