Oh my love
the tinting is sublime
dressed by your nude membranes
mobilized by your twinkle of the leather
devised by the divinity of the stripped epidermis
fashioned by the alcoholism of the unclothed dermis
composed by the euphony of the stripped cuticle
fabricated by the camellia of the unclad hide
You identify me liquefying your rind
at my substantial castle
Oh my love
In a list
A contest entry
- naked by le soir.
675 points, ended March 13, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i hope your love endears as i guess mine did not,your words are like poetry in motion.
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STUNNING
This poem was captivating and intellagently done I loved lines 5and6 such loving manner.
WOW great work as usual.
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This is a wonderful write. It flows so well together and the form of the poem, helps the flow even more. The words that you chose were so delicately pieced together, it was beautiful. Excellent write, and thanks for the comment on my poem, it was greatly appreciated.
<3 tearrs
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A rich deep meaninful beauty is how I see this and I adore your writing style that is so full of your soul, your depth and beauty always shine through. Always you have such excellent writes!
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wow. this is an amazing write right here. beautiful poem and makes me feel calm
great job here.
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-Lemon Bee-
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Great write my friend. Your words of beauty will fill the heart of many. Unclothed dermis, stripped cuticle, unclad hide.
great descriptions and full of meaning. katie
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BEAUTIFUL
Hello dear friend,
I hope this note greets you with a happy heart.I have just finished reading your poem, and i think that it is beautiful.You have penned this well.I like the form you used to create the shape of your write.Your write is full of love and beauty, and the reader can feel this.You have been a delight to read, and I thank you for sharing such beautiful words with us.
Take care my friend and much love to you and your family.
Your friend in poetry.
~Angel~
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beautiful poem, sweetly expressed and a delight to read. best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha
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Your words flow and fill the readers heart with love. There is such beauty in your write.
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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