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[ Some say that ]

Some say that
The ones inside
Who always speak
Their mind never
Understand what
Goes on inside
The head of someone
Who has the mind
Of three or four
Others
Some never understand
The tears that
Fall unshed
Due to restrictions
Due to expectations
Do you even
Understand what
Its like to
Feel the pain of
Others that
You've never met
Before but just seen
The anger that
Controls your
Body from doing
What you wish it
To do
Why does the
Pain of others
Add on to the
Pain you feel inside?
What is it
About the human mind
That stops us
Yet feels
So much pain
Horror
The tears
Start to fall
Down my face
As I realize
That I'm feeling
The death of
Someone I wish
Not to die
I feel the
Ripping sensation
As if it
Was my own
Down my arms
Down my legs
Across my arties
Everything doesn't
Seem to matter
Since I can
No longer
Feel your heartbeating
Inside my head
Where are you?

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  • moonburndcheese
    January 30, 2008

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    i like this poem its got strong emotion and i thank you for entering in my contest i enjoyed reading thi