a striped butterfly
lands on my canvas painting -
autumn rain descends
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful imagery and well-expressed.
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Beautiful in every sense. The imagery is great,good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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A lovely write.
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Thank you, teacher
How's the haiku class coming along?
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A very nice traditional haiku, amd your descriptions of the butterfly are done with your excellent grace.
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My dear friend, thanks a million!!
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I love your imagery. Very beautiful Haiku. best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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Thank you from the depth of my heart, dearest new friend
A warm hug from Pune,India..
(((((((Charishma))))))
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