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Each Second

I’m trying to wash away this dread in me
Because you are something I can’t bear to lose.

And now I can hear the ticking
And each second brings every minute closer
And every minute every hour.

Now time
Is slipping; 

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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    January 30, 2008
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    love it! short...but it said so much! i definitly felt it! bravo hun!