I often longed for the gleaming memories
A ray that glimpse from deep moor
An overflowed strength that captures
Me and my all sorrows.
I walk through these lanes that reach nowhere
I am nowadays as I am.
I wish to touch the senses where the glows dwell
Take me, lift me up, I am feather of ray
Totally full of memories
In me nowhere the real I am,
But these glowing memories.
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Romily
A contest entry
- Light by poetryality.
1750 points, ended February 3, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 13th Contest by Spiritualangel..PW Poems allowed... Picture Prompt... by spiritualangel.
470 points, ended February 8, 2008, 10 entries
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Thanks for the HM.
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A ray that glimpse from deep moor
An overflowed strength that captures
Me and my all sorrows.
Beautifully penned. Best of luck
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Thanks for your comment.
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Take me, lift me up, I am feather of ray
Totally full of memories
Loved those lines, great poem siv.
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Thanks for such a lovely comment.
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You have shed a glorious light on your thoughts with these words poet. I once wrote a poem in tribute to my brother who was senselessly murdered in 1981.
"Memories
are what we keep
when those we love
have fallen asleep"
That very short poem, and the memories of my younger brother, helped me to keep going on after his death. Your poem so reminded me of this.
Thank you for this entry and its light. I wish you well in the Comp.
Much Love & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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Thanks a lot for your comment.
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The light of life is beautifully written here, can the earth share anything better than this,very nicely written , thank you for sharing, good luck...
MM
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dada,,,, thanks a lot for comment.
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Memories makes humans.without memories we do not exist. A poem nicely written..Wish you the best in the contest
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