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Circle of Light

Wonder of wonders,
thunderous might,
lift us to bliss
in the Circle of Light.

Blessed good lady,
quiet you wait,
take us in closely
to Circle in Light.

Ever-bless't Mother,
thank you this morn,
wake us so gently
in Circle of Light.

Author notes

I thought of this while finishing a game of backgammon online and drinking my cooling black coffee, while the dryer spun, while the radio played its news of mens and women's voices on WBBM for the cats so they wouldn't feel so lonely in the grey cool basement of our little wooded house.

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  • SongOfSilence
    March 13, 2008

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    whoa!

    nicely done. in so few lines.. you managed to say so much. i love how this write is lighthearted, and positive. the last two lines are my favorite, i think.. but its so hard to choose, because the whole thing is so good!


  • Lowell Poe
    February 6, 2008

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    Well this is certainly beautiful and positive.
    I like uplifting and spiritual poetry.
    Half full, half empty,
    its all ones perspective.
    In this world it is so easy to be negative,
    but good people will see the good light inside you.
    You'll never walk alone when you think with your heart.
    This is also a wonderful title.
    A talent on to itself.
    This piece definitely makes me proud to have your comments on my work.
    I will treasure your input knowing what a fine writer you are. Hold your head high and stay in the Circle Of Light.

    MANY MANY BLESSINGS,
    LOWELL POE


    • cafegroundzero gold member
      February 6, 2008
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      Your kind words do give me too much honor, but I thank you nonetheless, Lowell Poe


      It has been a much more actual honor to get to exchange comments with you, Lowell Poe.


  • corrughadh
    February 6, 2008
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    mercy like this only comes from the strong

    a proper prayer. Drew


  • poetryality silver member
    February 3, 2008
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    This poem is filled with light. It is a wonder what we awaken with in our hearts and minds. I feel the warmth of the light, and its glow in your words. Thank you for the calm and spiritual beauty you've weaved here. I wish you the best in this Comp.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee

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